Comments : Lonely

  • 12 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to this piece.
    It is so sad, emotional and greatly written.
    I enjoy in your poetry very much.
    You should correct copy/paste errors, the poem would be easier to read.
    Keep up!
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very nice poem dear. I loved the flow and the word choice was great. The whole poem is cohesive and this adds more flavour to its content. 5/5 all the way

    Fsams

  • 12 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    Loved it
    I can't relate myself, but I've felt things close to it...
    like moonlight said, great word choice
    can't wait to read more
    tim

  • 10 years ago

    by Randy East

    Wow, what a way to express such hurt and heart ache. I really enjoyed this. I read it three times.

    I was kind of stuck in a somnambular haze,

    I definetly took a moment a looked that word up. Half awake half dreaming. I LOVE IT.

    nice one.

  • 10 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Ouch.
    That brought back a few memories and recents ones too so it hurt.
    I can totally relate
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Broken Masquerade

    Wowww. This is so heartfelt! It's so good that you can express you're emotions like that. It's such a relatable poem and captivates the reader from line 1. I love the lines "My cheeks wet and my chest hollow. Not knowing who I am anymore." I can really relate to that. This was amazingly written. I loved reading it, well done :D 5/5 for suree :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Alex D

    Very well written. The pain is so utterly evident it sucks the reader in. It flows and the structure fits the story well. I dig the use of somnambular too! Wonderfully penned!