I was very pleased to see someone had written a Harry Potter-related poem. :D My only criticism is that, now and then, the rhyming is a bit forced. But otherwise, great!

Em xxxxxx

When I said the rhyming was forced, I meant lines like this:

Sometimes for his classes he is late,

Where you change the sentence around so that it isn't structured the way it should be. No one would ever say, 'For his classes he is late', they would always say, 'He is late for his classes', which obviously I know doesn't rhyme, but the poem flows a lot better when you form sentences correctly. I'm sorry if I offended you by saying that; I definitey didn't mean to.

Em xxxxxxxx

Wow what a descriptive piece of poetry. I loved the story and its really beautifully explained. THe whole poem is 100% poetic and very cohesive. I loved and enjoyed reading this piece. Well deserved 5/5

With love
Fsams

Love the poem harry potter is the best

YAYAYAY! I WAS SOOOOOO HAPPY TO SEE THERE WAS POEMS 'BOUT HARRY POTTER! I absolutely LOVE Harry =D

long time fan =) ive read all the books at least 4 times - give or take a few - and ive watched all the movies probably way more than 30 times each. lol.

you did an EXTREMELY wonderful job =D

omg...im going to see t he 7th movie this thanksgiving holiday! xD
keep writing!