An emotional and engaging poem....can be agood song too...5/5 read my latest "A DEMONS PRAYER" vote and comment thank you

I'm not the best critic but I do like this poem it's really good.
You do need to get rid of the Be fever. Because you need stronger verbs
But other than that.
It's good.
By the way this is in response to the Poetry club thing you have..

Very sweet i love this poem great job!!
5/5

laura

This was a great poem i love it.. very sweet. you sound like you know how t treat a girl.. write me back cause i would love to get to know you better

Wow...That was wonderful. You are an excellent song writer. I could really picture it in my mind. It also was very easy to follow and understand. I loved it. Keep up the great work.

I really enjoyed reading this poem
its like the situation im in with my bf
i loved it
thankyou for writing it
5/5

This is reallyy sweet. I love it. =] <3

Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5