Wow a powerful poem well done.5/5

This is how you feel and it is put into a poetic form. I can tell because we have all been there.

But still how I wish I could hear you voice, those simple words "I Love You",
The ones that brought me rejoice

There are som area's that need improvement. That is one of them, you need to improve how you flow, one line is waaaaaay too big.

Love doesnt exist, its all just a lie,
I realized all that when you broke my heart and left it there to die.

samething there. I know that it's hard to shorten how you feel, I'm just saying that is a place where you can imporve your poems.

I think that this is a poem that we have all experienced. I wish there was some quick fix to get over it but there's not.

I wish you all the best and I hope that this advice helps you in some way shape or form.

Regards,
Shaun