That was great...
i always love these kind of styles which brings the true art of poetry out, beside the style i really loved the message and the great world choice you had.
you are truly a talented poet. keep up the great work and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

I played soccer, and this poem really makes you feel the heart of the player..
hard to explain
but good job :)

I like form of this poem but I don't like the topic. It isn't really deep. Imagery is excellent. It is very original but it isn't excellently written. 4/5

Ohhh, nice triple Senryu, Elaine.. I bet it was pretty difficult, I'm not good at writing poems like this lol.

I like how you did this one about sports.. Not something you usually see poems being about and was pretty good for a sport poem I believe. Lol and that's a lot coming from me since I hate sports and think they're pretty boring.

5/5 ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~