This was really good. i love it, 5/5. thanks for the comment =]

Good job sweetheart :)

i read a couple of your poems and you're doing well. keep it up and i'll be sure to read more.

thank you for commenting on my poetry.. it really means a lot to me.

take care

heidi b

I like it very much. It is interesting and unique. I don't like second stanza, fourth is my favorite. I like the topic and atmosphere of this poem is great. 5/5