Comments : I don't like who i've become

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was ok, but i didn't get the point, you said that you don't like what you've become but you didn't have a point to it, like why you dont like yourself, and what you did for you to not like yourself. it just said the same thing over and over. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    I am not suppose to act like this
    I am suppose to be above all of this
    I use to be a better person
    But I threw it all away for a boy

    These lines are beautiful, I like th epoem in totality. But still there is room for improvement :)

    Fsams