Comments : I Loved You

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very beautiful and romantic poem..........you've captured true perfectly with your lovely descriptive images....love the ending verse.....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Douglas

    And I love you now as age and time have drawn their lines
    Across our eyes and cheeks and while we, once again, walk
    alone
    Along the fine white sand beneath a golden sunset,
    Your lips still glistening from my kisses, and with a heart
    That knows it cannot love you more but somehow always
    will.

    Beautiful memories very heart touching :)
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Doug,

    "And I love you now as age and time have drawn their lines
    Across our eyes and cheeks and while we, once again, walk
    alone
    Along the fine white sand beneath a golden sunset,
    Your lips still glistening from my kisses, and with a heart
    That knows it cannot love you more but somehow always
    will."

    Beautiful words and sentiments. Great memories you have can never be taken from you.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Sir, this was beautiful penned, lovely yet romantic you portrait here, you describe them within beautiful emotions write.......what else i can say, well done!

    Best wishes, Bert.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Excellent! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    She is a very lucky lady! a wonderful tribute to a love that has endured through time.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kourtney

    That is so cute