This is a really good poem. it's soo sad.
I really like the part,
"Seeing you in that bed
Tubes running everywhere
Panic and tears filling me."
On the second to last line the I isn't capitalized, and it seemed like you were going for that look.
Then ending is really sad too.
keep writing
peace
soffe

Arrr thats so bad
anyhow remember me green dragon raaaaawwrr
James