Ya its very interesting
i like the style
good job

ashleigh

Keenan, this is a really good poem. I love how it's different from most of your poetry. I like the flow, it was flawless and your vocabulary was great!!
keep it up keenan;)

Hey Keenan I really like this one it's soo different than what you normally write... I think it's great!!!

Beck

This is a very well written peice, simple yet very effective. it's flow is flawless and the sort lines are very effective.

AWE! keekee! this poem is absolutely beautiful! i loved it so much!It was well writen on top of many other things that made me like it! well... great job!<3
-Haii

It is short but very effective, like some thoughts in your mind, it has good flow and it is original. It isn't classic love poem which is great. Rhythm is superb in this one, it deserves 5/5