Comments : The Harvest

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Good job it was dark and creepy! keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, this poem is amazing. Every stanza is great! You created incredibly, hunting atmosphere. Topic is excellent and you wrote this poem superbly. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSilentlyScreamingxx

    Wow, great poem, pretty un-nerving but gives great atmosphere.

    "Guilty souls are being embraced
    Pictures from portraits are slowly erased
    Dark ink starts to pour from the sky
    Voices pleading not to be chased"

    I particularly like this stanza, its very haunting indeed.

    Amy x