WOW< i thought it was a really good poem. Like the way you described everything. Exept in one of the stanzas you used the world blue twice in it, and that throws the flow off a little bit. But other than that it was a great poem, 5/5

Terra, this was a beautiful poem. Friendships do change, expecially in highschool, and it's okay to grow and learn but never lose those memories because they make you who you are. A beautiful piece love. =]

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Chow