Its a little mixed up... maybe re read it and add a few little words like you and stuff...... its hard to get through. but it has a very good idea from what i get off it. good write
<3 sarah

Nice poem, especially the end!
"Isn't that a great gift for Valentine?"
Take care ,
Elien

I really liked your poem!
especially the end...
It makes your poem strong!
i really like it!

Wow great work!
keep it up
-Lisa