Beautifully written!
Its so short, but the wording was so perfect any longer would have ruined it!
Very sweet and loving.
Brilliant.
(Thanks for your last comment, Your a stunning writer, and comment like that from you means a hell of a lot.)
Kat-x-

You are a beautiful writer. I enjoy reading your stuff. Keep it up. I would give critique...but I have none to give.

Very interesting poem. Atmosphere that you created is amazing. You described emotions on very unique way. 5/5

Really cute! Simple and enjoyable. Emotions were strongly there. Flowed great! Great written acrostic poem!
5/5

This is deffinently one of the better acrostic poems I've come across recently. Great job!

5/5!! this is really good!!! such care!! don't stop writeing!
-Marina

Short but sweet and cute

i usually dont like acrostics but you did a brilliant job on this one
i give you 5/5 for truely putting your feeling in an acrostic(i know its hard to)

Another great poem, Elaine. I honestly don't see how you do it! Whenever I read this.. It reminded me of one of my ex's for some odd reason. I guess it was the whole bridge mending thing you had in here.. I was always wishing back then that he'd mend the bridge between us after what happened.

Anyways.. beautiful poem Elaine, another 5/5 =)

~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

Very well written, with great imagery and awesome flow
love Tara-Kay
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