Debbie, what a beautiful penned once again you portrait here, such a unique style writing... marvelous!!
Words may be mild and fair but the tone may pierce like a dart; Words may be soft as the summer air but the tone may break the heart; For works come from the mind, grow by study and art, But tone leaps from the inner self, revealing the state of the heart.
Have a good day! an talk with you again soon, be safe, Bert.
I actually have tears in my eyes... This is endlessly touching and I can relate to this stunning poem on so many levels.
Whole metaphor within this piece is fantastic, and I am honestly left in awe.
Brilliant piece of sad poetry, filled with so many excellently expressed emotions. I like the imagery that you portrayed, too.
This poem brings me back some memories and that made it so captivating for me.