I really loved the content of this piece, particularly the ending line,
"Even the moon in its infinite yet familiar darkness needs the embrace of the suns light."
Really genius literary work there.

One thing you might want to consider is breaking up the lines, it's a little clustered and makes for slightly difficult reading. Consider typing it out to show up a little differently (less words per line, indentations, ext.). The presentation done a little differently would make for an even better piece.

Good luck and excellent work.