Comments : Suicide is your fault

  • 16 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    It was a good poem, but there wasnt really a flow to it. and wouldnt you give them the satisfaction of defeat, by commiting suicide? nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    It be honest love, I didn't find it satisfiying at all. I believe you could do alot better, and to me it was too...unoriginal like. But this is only my opinion.