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It was a good poem, but there wasnt really a flow to it. and wouldnt you give them the satisfaction of defeat, by commiting suicide? nice job.
by Lets Keep it A Surprise
It was...to be honest love, I didn't find it satisfiying at all. I believe you could do alot better, and to me it was too...unoriginal like. But this is only my opinion.