Jeannie
How beautiful :) The picture you have painted makes me wnat to be there. How wonderful.

Two souls that nestle closely
as our hearts rise to the sky
And dance among moon and stars
to a summer lullaby.

~sigh~ memories stirred again .
Love Cindy

Oh wow I love this poem...the way you worded it made it seem like I was laying there too. It was a very peaceful read. It also had a nice flow. 5/5

O.O that was brilliant! :) I loved it. Wow. Amazing. Gold. 5/5.

What a gorgoeus poem!

“Crystal stars flashing bright
then slowly fades away
Into the sky they shoot across
the vestige Milky way
Upon the sand you rest your head
and close your sleepy eyes
A murmur from your tender lips
that tease and tantalize.”
. . . you have a great imagery here, it’s like
I’m driven away from the reality, you have also played your words cleverly and it’s wonderful

“Against the midnight silence
hear a seagull in the breeze
Flying cross the moonlit sky
with salty ocean ease
Around us tranquil slumber
as we lay beneath the palms
Ebb tide laps the shore of sand
while summer sings its song”
. . . this part here is really lovely and the play
Of imagination is brilliant, Oh I just love how you put them together to formulate a lovely piece

"Enchanted by the melody,
the tune so soft and sweet
I close my eyes and welcome
all the tender summer dreams
Two souls that nestle closely
as our hearts rise to the sky
And dance among moon and stars
to a summer lullaby. "
. . . the conclusion, so serene and diverts me in to a longing peace, a powerful ending with less force that impressed me the most

What a love piece you have here I enjoyed it very much!

=5/5=

Perfect poem. Great flow. I can read your poems all day. As I plan too.

My heart and mind was singing while reading this beautiful poem. =)