Andrew
WOW! This is a great piece. Imagery is wonderful. The pain and sadness cry from your words.

haunted by everything that isnt there
eating away of whats left of me
the name cursed by all who care

This stanza really captures the essence of the entire piece.
Take Care Cindy

Very nice poem with creative imagery and nice flow. 5/5

Omg, andrew this is magnificant, seriously, the way you express and idea is just perfect. 5/5