Comments : My Work

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow! this is such an inspirational poem..im glad you enjoy what you do...

    i love this poem ...from begininng to the end... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    WOW, i thoguht it was a very good poem. Very inspirational. Your rhyming was good, and the fflow was great.

    "What I've just described to you
    Is my schedule every day,
    This work I do for others
    Cures my walls of pure dismay."

    Favorite stanza^^

    the ending was very well put together

    a well deserved, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Its a wonderful feeling that helping others can make us feel..and you captured the amazing emotion that it brings as well..its not only good that you help people in such a positive way (whatever it may be), but that you feel good about it, and it makes you happy..keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Very good poem...

    Lonely in her baren room
    Grateful for my knock.

    ^ Those were my favorite lines...

    Very good writting...Keep it up...

    5/5.... =)

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    What a beautiful penned, my pleasure to read.... this was so simply but well sending the message...Awesome!