Awe dear. this poem caught my heart. its amazing and i love you ( L )

one line though...
that will never become a baby brother....
i think baby throws it off seeing as you have it written a few lines above. say the stanza with the baby brother. then just with brother and you choose what you like better...

and you have a few spelling errors as well. but thats all. !! i loved this poem. i want to cry right now ( L ) love you dear.

Im sorry to hear about the miscarriage.

i have a baby cousin & he is my little boy. i dont know what i would do if he was a miscarriage. so i know where you are so sad!

Hey im here if anythings wrong ; )
but great poem its sad because its true but it was realy good