Beautiful expressive emotions penned you portrait here, simply...oh that make me stop awhile dear.... beautiful done!

A well written piece about such a dark subject, you expressed yourself very well indeed, well done 5/5

This is just perfect. Excellent writing, awesome flow, and wow what an ending. You nailed it, very nice!

Ummmm Wenchy....as Sunny would say
"You smacked it!!" LOL Very powerful piece and can't find a favorite stanza because they were all perfectly written. Love it!!

Very powerful and captivating, great descriptions and very vivid imagery.
My favorite stanza is:
-one single tear
upon a rose of red
one single tear
is all that she would shed-

Beautifully written piece, very dark and touching.
5/5

Aaaah. such a great writing style. i loved the way you wrote it. i respect it