Jeannie
Awesome piece. I love reading your writing. It always moves me.

At last thy weakened state I claim
No breath is left to hold
Victor of thy will, now I reclaim
Barren ash, Death be my name.

Very deep and intense.
Excellent!
Love Cindy

Wow, that's written with such power.. Death is such a strong thing, and so definite, and you have captured the strength that it holds. Beautifully written, as always. Well done. xx