I liked this poem...The story behind it was awesome...The voacb was excellent too....

The ending was just right too....

Overall 5/5...

I thought it was GREAT
and the imagery was also
a nice supplement

but the ending
about being claustaphobic
was in lay-mans terms
a little
non-fitting as
an ending for this poem

but the rest of it was GREAT

"Words and phrases have kept you in contempt.
Ignorance flowing around you like music notes in cartoons.
You follow and hope you find bliss in this world you hide yourself from
Trapped inside of a box which you cannot cut holes in nor break."

favorite part ^^

another well deserved

5/5

"It's a good thing you're not claustrophobic."

That made me chuckle.
Another jaw-dropping poem, darling.
The depth amazed me in this one.
Flow was natural instead of physical.
Your insight was well put, as was heart.
Overall Rating: 4.8/5

Interesting form and use of words. good content, but a little hard to follow at times. love the title, and it's part in the poem. again, interesting metaphor being used. makes me think, which is a good indication it's well written. making a reader think is key. good job (: 5/5