Honey, this is a beautiful poem. It portrays a deep emotion and i can sense frustration.

Don't give up on your dreams, don't sell yourself short, you're so much better than that.

Reach for the sky darl.

Ally. x

ps. i really appreciate your comments. x

This is very nice.
it potrays emotions that many people feel throughout the course of their life.
the only thing i can say is be careful of the flow.. it does go off a bit sometimes.
but an awesome read.

oh and i hope that isnt ur real phone number, u might get some interesting calls from some crazy people, haha.

5/5