Another great one Gem! An easy read with a great message...

Great poem.
Maybe I know what the twist is.. But I'm not sure of it..
Anyway, loved reading it.
Take care

YUS! I was totally write on the hidden meaning, I was thinking it but wasn`t sure so it`s a good thing you put that little info bit there for me! Lol. I love this, it`s amazing. Again, from the first line I was instantly hooked in. And the twist that you added into this Darling, was genius. Really was. You`re a great poet, I`m jealous lol.

"Safe in the corner in the midst of the night
Sex, lies and betrayal have reached a new height"

^^ loveloveLOVE it.

5.5
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Amazing flow, word choice and rhymes. This was an enjoyable read. Very captivating from begining to end. 5/5

marcella