Wow...Amazing...I loved this...It was so short and real cute...

But now, look at us, how happy we've become.
No longer just two, we've become one.

^ Those were my favorite lines...

Keep Writting...5/5...

Rhyming isn't unique. This poem isn't original and you could wrote this piece much better. First stanza isn't good. Second is little better and the last one is greatest but rhyming in that third stanza is poor. 3/5 Sorry... That is just my opinion, I really like your other poems more.

This is so perfect! I love the line where you said, "i know that you know." that was so cute and so emotional because it's the truth in any good relationship, you know what the other person is thinking. It's the joy of really knowing someone so intimatel that they can't hide anything from you. :)
*ME*