I just clicked on this poem, cause the title was intresting, not knowing it was going to be a really good poem! And once I read the first line.. I just wanted to keep on reading. Such a good flow, and a good poem! I absolutely love how you use mutiple words to describe one thing like:
- pretty little lies
-sweet innocent little girl etc.
Just a good poem! =D
5/5!

- Could you read/comment one of mine, if you have the time =]?
xxx

This is pretty cool! You write very well!