Your poems are really clear. I like them. Keep them going.

(Thumbs up'-')

I loved it great imagery and creativity linking it to our lives great job!!!5/5

laura

Aaw the imagery in this poem is gorgeous, I could seriously picture the moment in my mind and it flowed really well to! Keep it up :)

Clear message and well worded good job mate.

Nicely done. Your poems are really easy to understand. and very well worded. Keep up the good work and comment my stuff when you get the chance. i don't have much yet, but i'm new at this poetry thing.
Keep up the good work!