It shows a lot of feelings and the ending was amazing it made the poem amazing! it was very good 5/5

I really liked this poem, dear.
I think the flow could have been a bit better, but other than that amazing poem. :]

Nice one.... you're a winner

You can make it better by adding good rhymes. Make the stanzas ordered and make a good structure. Poems must follow a particlar structure :0

No offense plse

I really like your poem.
sounded like it came from the heart. :)
i voted and gave it a 5/5
oh and please return the favor. :)