Wow... thats the first thing that comes to mind. This poem is beyond good. Keep writing I'd love to read more of you r work

This poem can really touch the reader.. yes,, its really touched me.. what a super way to reach out to someone.. well.. many as i can see your comments.. DO NOT STOP WRITEING!! this is fabulas
-Marina

Wow your amazing thats beautiful and sad... keep up the good work=]
laura xxx

This piece left me speechless..
i definitelyy feltt the emotions in this poem. very expressive
awesomee job!
definitely a 5/5!! :)

Beautiful poem.
Emotional, sad.
Loved reading it.
Take care

Cin that is really good and sad :(
i love u so much cin!:)