Wow that was brilliant!...a little dark but it was fantastic!...powerful words..5/5

Amazing poem thats what I think keep it up

Omg thats a top poem i loved it all the way 5/5

Ooo scaryy..very well written..luved it..
Enjoyable to read..beautiful piece..
-sarah

That was scary, but amazing. The vividness and your perfect choice of words puts this on my favourites.
Awesome

WOW!
That is an amazing poem.
That blew me away!