Wow this poem is amazing! i love it.... its so sad....and so touching..i felt the emotion in it... 5/5 great write!

Wow...That really deep...Had alot of emotion..
It was written so beautifully...Yet kind of sad...

The flow was flawless throughout the whole thing and the vocab was just right...

Overall 5/5 ... =]

Good Luck On The Contest!!

I absolutely loved it. theway you expressed your point in the words was amazing. it was deep, emotional and well thought of. 5/5

Excellent piec of poetry, I loved the beautiful flow and the exceptionally great wordings plus the rythm and the way it is structured. Superb 5/5 all the way

Tc
Fsams