I'm guessing your boyfriend is a pizza boy or you like the pizza boy, ok, it was an interesting write, i have never read anything like this before either, but i must say it was very pictured in my mind. 5/5

This is very good! =D I really love the flow, and love how it makes sense.. =) It's really really cute! I couldn't make it any better lol =)
5/5!

So cute, very innocent and easy to read , really liked it keep it up

I loved this, it was both original and unique in concept, the imagery you portrayed is beautifully done and the flow is good throughout the entire piece.

Lol.. aww it was cute, and neat. It's disney! lol well and some others but yeah. nice nice write.
5/5

Lol very good never seen one like this before lol but its good 5/5