Both poems, I've read of yours so far is so deep...And they like almost knock me off my feet when I read them...

I think your going on my fav's....

Overall 5/5....

Nice poem. I like the repition(i think). I would like to see other poems besides sad.

Good job. Nicely done. ^_^ 5/5 I like how u wrote it.
~*~Skye~*~

Great poem. 5/5 for sure. It's very deep.

Fav.

I really like the style you used....its great!!! :) 5/5

Your very talented