Nope that is really good, well done xxxx

Wow..I feel the exact same way..You expressed it so wonderfully...

The ending was so straight...I liked it...

5/5

Wow beautiful, Amber this isnice, you have kept the consecutive rhymes very well. I loved the structure and how you have put the words. Short wordings with great meanings 5/5 all the way

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Fsams

I enjoyed reading this. even with the short lines the emotion is expressed so well..i could feel your pain while reading it.
great job! a beautiful and moving poem!

I hope you stay strong hunn.
great work! =]
--Viola

Hey it mite be a short poem but i really liked that really good :) xxx

This was a beautiful and emotional poem...i really like the way your emotion poured it self out wit your words...keep writing...

I don't think the short lines takes away from the poem or the meaning. I like it. Great job.

Oh wow..really beautifully written..even tho it was short I really leiked it..very sad.. emotional..powerful words..well done..good job
I give u 5/5 u deserve it!
-sarah

Full of emotion.....nice poem 5/5

Dame girl how do you do it your only 13?
your good