*Stares wide eyes at miranda*
My gosh girl! You are talented! I never knew you could write like that. Your better than me:D Lol, I already knew that.
This poem was very heartfelt. And you did a wonderful job on displaying your emotion's.
Keep it up hun!
Elaine.

Great job.

this is a beautifully written poem..flowed good and overall was a great read...5/5

My favorite stanza is the last one. You expressed emotions in this poem on a very good way. i don't prefer love poems like this one but all in all you wrote it truly nicely. It is short but very descriptive and filled with many feelings. I enjoyed reading it.