WOW! That was one of the most beautiful and deep things I have ever read. That took my breath away, I was seriously speechless for a few minutes there. I like how the poem didnt really paint a picture but rather it created feelings. It flowed nicely and made it sound so...so...I dont know, majestic, but thats not the right word. oh well. It was wonderful. Great poem!

~Morgan~

Wonderful.deep.well writen. 10/10 xx

Very well written and truly it inspires one person who could read it.. the flow and imagery are great!! Another great work..keep it up!

So inspiring, my type of poem at the moment, gives us hope and faith.
wow, a great piece
love Tara-Kay
xx

Wow. your writing is awesome. you structure was amazing and your words created such a strong picture in my mind. 5/5

It is interesting and very positive but it isn't one of your best poems. Topic is good and this piece is greatly written. I like the message of this poem. 5/5