The emotion is strong and clear, the flow is great, the word choice is good, and the message is clear. Well written, Stepping up the vocab could improve the power a bit. but other than that excellent job

What a emotions penned you portrait here, so heartfelt yet writing well within beautiful emotions... "Love says no with empathy and great compassion. Love is firm, but when needed it must be tender." Beautiful done!

What a nice poem.... i love it ..

good job :D

Wonderful, and great rhyme scheme!

I love it!!lol
Great Job =]]