This is an Amazing poem.
nice title it fits =]
and thanks.
Ashley,
your poetry is so good it reminds me of memories of when I was little lol.

<3
ily

I thought this was amazing
so many GREAT lines
coursed through it
and it was good

but at the end you could have made
it flow better
and could of had a better ending to
fit such a magnificent poem

"He opens his little box of horrors as chills run up and down your spine; "

favorite line^^

well deserved, 5/5

My mouth was open and my eyes were wide.
Throughout this whole poem.
This one is going on my favorites.
You are doing wonderfully, keep it up.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5
Rub that you got a 5 in Philly's face. Lol.

Your poetry is wonderful...I really enjoy reading it...They all have great imagery...And so deep...There enjoyable to read...

5/5.....