Comments : Confusions (Collab)

  • 16 years ago

    by Zima Ultifera

    HEy Birgit!

    I Loved writing this together!
    It turned out really great didnt it!! :D
    Really did!

    Good job on us both!! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    Hmm not my style but quite good

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good I useually feel that way with guys great expression nice work
    5/5
    kaila

  • Well, I know I've liked 2 guys at the same time before and yes it was about a week of "Confusions"*LOL*Great piece.I loved it!Whether everyone will admit it or not, I know we've all been stranded in a situation like that.5/5 for sure ^_^

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by katy

    Wow this poem is well written so much emotion really good use of words love it so much!! i really get the situation also, well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    You two are very talented this is a beautiful poem...and i mean that honestly...i love the way it was different from just a regular poem i would normally read...this makes me want to do a collad...lol great flow..5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    I think we all have a little of this at one time eh??
    i have this problem right now actually.. and that describes it really really well!!
    good job guys :)
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great work you both.
    A good poem. Once I had that problem too.
    It's a very good discription.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    I dont like the last line....(i think)....

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Nicely done collab. The substance hits home and captures my heart: it is something I can connect with. Yeah. I'm like one of the girls. But alas, he chose the other girl instead of me. What a drama. Still can't forget him though (you know him). Anyway, sorry for the ramble. Both of you did well. It's a lovely collab. Thanks for sharing!