Aren't we just great writers.. (>'')><(''<)
Just kidding =] Anyway, thanks for asking to write this with you =] hihi! I like how it turned out ^^
Keep smiling!
<3
5/5

Wow i really like this poem...i can relate to it because i've liked a guy before who liked me back but also liked another girl and he had to choose...and of course i wasnt the one he chose =[ ....

but your poem was amazing..good job!

Good job. I am very picky about love poems because they usually go into two catagories. Either simple school love scribbles or top poetic masterpieces. The difference is the choice of words and the arrangement of words. How to make a poem more poetic without straying from the main point. Example:

When two, not one, charms your very heart
Every existing sanity goes right off the chart
One, a seductress with a rosy tattoo
The other more gentle, but you love her too