Wow, this poem is so deep, emotional, very touching and meaningful.
Whole piece is excellently written, it sound so honest, and it's full with pain.
5/5 from me.

This is truely a sad and beautiful poem. The mournful feelings are nicely expressed and flowing. You might check the first line and correct the tense mistake :)
tc
Fsams

That was truely heart touching poem....loved the way u expressed it.

It did not hurt me when you said
"I don't love you"
what hurt me most when you said
"find some other girl"

best stanza

God bless u

Aww =( Sad emotional poem.
Sorry about this short comment.. I'm out of inspiration.. T_T
5/5 though!
=]

Beautiful. An excellent poem, impressive.

Amazingly heart felt well wrightin and also smooth it kept me wanting more

Hassan
Very sad and moving write. The pain in your heart can be felt in your words.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Dat is a brill poem really enjoy it great job