Douglas the Sonnet turned out beautiful.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

Douglas....this is an amazing and thought provoking piece....so beautiful.....

Poor words that never formed upon their lips
nor emanated their thoughts among the stars
of night; poor eyes that never cried at dreams
which sparkled within their perfect flawless right.

^ poor souls that have never experienced such perfection of true love.............obviously you have and captured it so well....all the best, Debbie

Beautiful, especially the ending. I didn't mind the and at the end of the line either......

Awww this is very good i like it a lot something about it just kinda pulled me in maybe i can relate or maybe it was just great great job with this one!

laura

Many thanks for the comment and your work here truly flows! 5.5

I loved the message here , It is amazing no matter how bad things get we all seem to want to love and be loved, in the end thats what really matters. thank you for your comments .nice to meet you.

How true these words are. we see it all the time - but yes, the day the poor rise, the mighty world will have to contend with a lot!

thank you for your wonderful comments on my work.

peace and luck
shobhana

This is a very nice piece i really like this line

Poor words that never formed upon the lips

it really stands out to me, well done xox sam

Beautiful sonnet you penned here my friend, lovely yet so heartfelt emotions......Awesome!

Just a beautiful poem you had written....

Nazeer with you...

This is a fantastic Multi collaboration I wuld say. The word choice is great and the flow is kep good. This is having poetic qualities and the structure is also great. 5/5 all the way

Tc
Fsams