Comments : Sonnet XI

  • 12 years ago

    by Cindy

    Douglas the Sonnet turned out beautiful.
    Excellent job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 12 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Douglas....this is an amazing and thought provoking piece....so beautiful.....

    Poor words that never formed upon their lips
    nor emanated their thoughts among the stars
    of night; poor eyes that never cried at dreams
    which sparkled within their perfect flawless right.

    ^ poor souls that have never experienced such perfection of true love.............obviously you have and captured it so well....all the best, Debbie

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautiful, especially the ending. I didn't mind the and at the end of the line either......

  • 12 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Awww this is very good i like it a lot something about it just kinda pulled me in maybe i can relate or maybe it was just great great job with this one!

    laura

  • 12 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Many thanks for the comment and your work here truly flows! 5.5

  • 12 years ago

    by Deana

    I loved the message here , It is amazing no matter how bad things get we all seem to want to love and be loved, in the end thats what really matters. thank you for your comments .nice to meet you.

  • 12 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    How true these words are. we see it all the time - but yes, the day the poor rise, the mighty world will have to contend with a lot!

    thank you for your wonderful comments on my work.

    peace and luck
    shobhana

  • 12 years ago

    by Lithium

    This is a very nice piece i really like this line

    Poor words that never formed upon the lips

    it really stands out to me, well done xox sam

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful sonnet you penned here my friend, lovely yet so heartfelt emotions......Awesome!

  • 12 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Just a beautiful poem you had written....

    Nazeer with you...

  • 12 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is a fantastic Multi collaboration I wuld say. The word choice is great and the flow is kep good. This is having poetic qualities and the structure is also great. 5/5 all the way

    Tc
    Fsams