I had to read it thoroughly twice before understanding the concept fully. ( I'm just that thick lol ). The flow was lilting and touching, the message very hmm...sad and loving.

"and Cradle you eternally
so that you never will leave me."

My favorite out of the whole poem :)

5/5 as always

Quillx

Wow Actully I've read a couple of your poems and after writting this I'm planning on going back to read more of your poems ! =P I'm not that great at writting but you for sure have talent.. Keep Writting as great as you do ! =)))
Take Care
Byee xoOxx

I LOVE this. I'm definitely putting it in my favourites. It's...a GORGEOUS poem. I just love the concept. It's adorable. Sorry about getting mushy but I seriously think it's amazing.
Please keep writing. You have major talent.

Wow i really love how you write. its very unique. loved the poem=) it has so much emotion in it!

I loved the overall idea of this.
The way you set this up, and by that I mean I was the stanzas were, added a lot of effect on the reader.
Although your flow was spuratic I still liked it a lot.
Great job!
5/5

XxAmberxX

With the situation I am in right now, this fits perfect for the way I feel. It was written really well btw. I loved the whole thing.

*Jayde*

If this poem was any longer, i would have passed out and killed some brain cells because this poem made me hold my breath through the whole thing. im adding this to my favorite poems
MWAH!
and you have already commented on some of my poems, but if there is one you havent, go ahead. it does not matter to me! i prefer yours over mine anyday!

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=107073

^^ there is the link to my profile, even though you can just click on my name, but, i put the support thing in my profile, even though you already know i support it!
<3
The Devil