Let te emotions through and deal witthem xxxx hope all is ok xx good work xxxxxxxxx

Ok I love the second verse and the last couple lines. I love poems that incorporate the title within one of the verses, especially one at the end to round it out and bring it back to meet itself so that it makes a lot of sense. And in the second verse, I think that style was very interesting. I really like how you tied the third line back to the first and the forth line to the second. Very intersting. Don't know why it caught my attention like it did but I really like it. :) 5/5 as always!
~Midnight Sun