Good job... that set a mood over meh.
~*~Skye~*~

Thanks so much for the vote and comment! You write some pretty fancy poetry yourself. 5/5

Wonderful! It feels dark and sad all at once! 5/5

It is very interesting and original. Ending is very effective, imagery is great and you created superb atmosphere. You have some mistakes, you used some words more than once and that leaves really bad impression. Anyway this poem shows that you have talent. Well done!

Wow. that poem was deep nice work
Lov SarahEmiilii

Wow....that was a really deep and beautiful poem!!! great job!!! 5/5

Dang that is deep
i like this poem alot its crazy and good at tha same time 5/5