Ooo great poem keenan,
and maybe it's linked to the saying "women, can't live with them, can't live without them"
I'm really not sure, but maybe it's not like that...you know, I know a lot of girls who give guys another chance. hmm, i don't know, it depends on how much you like the person i guess. Lol, wow watch me blabber on:P
well this was great!!!

Hey I like this one it's true though if you think about it... I guess it's cuz if a girl cheats on a guy people give the excuse of she was lonely or he wasn't doing enough..But if a guy cheats those excuses are no longer given people say that he is scum because he hurt a girl not even thinking that there was a possiblity of she wasn't enough or maybe miss-treating him..But yet that doesn't make it right on either side...Babbles on yatta yatta great job Keenan

If he/she did it the first time in the hard way, there's no doubt he/she will do it the second time in the easiest way.

This is a nice piece. and it is true in ways, it brings up good questions

Hehe ily keekee! u ask questions i want 2 no 2!hehe lol i really liked it tho!hehe it was really good! kinda deep!

Yes i agree with her ^^ makes people think
good job

ashleigh

It's true.... o_O But then again, you can ask: Why is it, that guys are seen as stronger people.. or get paid more. etc ;]

Short but strong thoughtfull poem =]
5/5

Wow..good 5/5

Hi dear,

your poems are flourishing, each and every expression there could be a precious cherish awaits from the professional authors... well done and keep up your work.. 100 marks and you deserve for this poem..

Nazeer

That ws great!
and your completely right that is the way the world seems to work. the man can never be forgiven, but the women can.
I completely agree with you.

Great poem keep it up
cheers
Kris

I liked this peice,but I think you could improve it alot.
Perhaps if you add more too it, you will portray greater emotion's...

However it was still enjoyable,
keep it up,
--Elly.