I felt my heart break when I read this. 5/5

Woow .. i love it .. i like how u matched the words :D the rhythm was great ... good job

Wowwy..I love it! 5/5 :]

This poem is really sad. the words hold alot of pain. i could not stop reading. 5/5.
love willow oxox

Wow! this was very good. the emotion portrayed is so deep and real.
i like the word choice.
a very sad but beautifully written poem.
great work! =]
--Viola