This is a really deep poem, I think it's actually too deep for me:S
wow keenan, great job. Usually I swim lower than all the others in the world, but you have gone deeper. I liked this poem alot, great job!!!!

Awesome poem thanks for the comment on "July 8th" my anniversary went well

I like it ALOT is it now about you and not sorta focused on the one that it used to represent? Anywho I do like it alot it's great!! Will there be more?? Great job keep writting:)

KeeKee i luved it!!! it put a smile on my face 2 read such beautiful work!

Awesome poems i likeit :)

ashleigh

Yes, it could have been your fault; and yes, it could have been save.

Is there another sequel for this? Well. Obviously, lol. I'd like to read it, too. :) I liked the thought you composed about the conversion of love into some sort of manic passion, which then leads to destruction. Nice one. I've had an enjoyable visit, as always. :) ~Marian